Yesterday afternoon, I bought three hamsters with my mother. They are cute and small.They have a round body and a very short tail. One hamster is yellow and the others are white. The yelllow hamster looks like a yellow ball. So, I give him a name (as) yellow ball. One white hamster is very lazy. I give him a name (as) lazy boy. One white hamster can ran very fast. I give him a name (as) white sword.
They can drink water by themselves.They can sleep by themselves. Once I hold yellow ball in my hand, he bited my finger. He may thought that my finger was food too.
I take care of these hamsters everyday. I play with them everyday. They are my friends. They are my family. I love them.
儿子的第一篇英语作文，语言有点啰嗦，有些句子连接也比较生硬。做为练手第一步，值得鼓励。终于能动笔了，加油。
