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晴晴特别爱写书，不知不觉写了好多。最近写了本《A Beautiful Horse》，我还觉得特别有意思，分享一下。
错别字不少。我帮她打印出来。公主书看多了，写的好多这样的。
特别申明一下，晴晴是在澳洲上学，所以英文已经成为她的“母语”了......
Once upon a time, there was a mother horse and her Foal. One day, they went to the river to have a drink. The foal had already grown up into a beautiful horse. Her name is Eve.
They were busily drinking, a huge current was hit them in the water! They got washed to another land! When Phillip saw the beautiful horse just lying there he just had to kiss her. So he did. He shouted, “Hey, Rombus, I need you to get someone to the hospital.”
“coming.” said Rombus. (Rombus loves picking flowers and giving them to horsy and that’s why he sometimes get chased by bees.) When Eve opened her eyes, Phillips and Eve fell in love straight away.
“Would you kindly bring me to my mother?” asked Eve.
“Of course I will.” replied Phillip. He showed where the hospital was, and when Eve saw her mother she asked, “Are you okay?” Horsy said, “She’s going to be okay.” Eve cried. Then she sobbed, “Oh, Phillip, will you please take me back home when my mother is better?” “Of course I will, and we may marry.” Eve hugged Phillip.
Later they all did some wonderful things together, had a picnic, sing songs, have a race and Phillip even made perfume on Eve’s birthday. At last, Eve’s mother was better, (Hooray!) and walked until they came to a castle.
That’s when Eve saw her father carrying many bags full of grain. He said, “I need to get these bags of grain to the miller to make it into flour but I am hurt. I can’t do it. My knee is bleeding. I tripped over a rock and now my knee is bleeding. I don’t know what to do.
“Oh, no need. We will help you.” Said Eve. Then she put her hair on the bleeding part and sang, “Somebody is hurt, please help me my father is hur. Oh, please help me, he had to bring many bags of grain to he miller and as he walked, he tripped over a rock and he is bleeding. We don't’ know what to do. Oh, please help me.” Phillip didn’t believe how beautiful Eve’s voice was, Rombus and Horsy didn’t believe how beautiful Eve’s voice was and three of them thought they were dreaming, but they were not.
When Eve took her hair off, the bleeding was better. How magical Eve’s hair is!
Later they had their wedding. Eve and Phillip had a delicious cake with a rainbow, pieces of chocolate and some strawberry, blueberry, and raspberry and cherry sprinkle on the cake.
Eve’s father helped make the cake in the cooking room in the palace because he gave flour to the cookers. They worked very hard to make cookies, juice and delicious food.
The End
晴晴特别爱写书，不知不觉写了好多。最近写了本《A Beautiful Horse》，我还觉得特别有意思，分享一下。
错别字不少。我帮她打印出来。公主书看多了，写的好多这样的。
特别申明一下，晴晴是在澳洲上学，所以英文已经成为她的“母语”了......
Chapter 1
Once upon a time, there was a mother horse and her Foal. One day, they went to the river to have a drink. The foal had already grown up into a beautiful horse. Her name is Eve.
They were busily drinking, a huge current was hit them in the water! They got washed to another land! When Phillip saw the beautiful horse just lying there he just had to kiss her. So he did. He shouted, “Hey, Rombus, I need you to get someone to the hospital.”
“coming.” said Rombus. (Rombus loves picking flowers and giving them to horsy and that’s why he sometimes get chased by bees.) When Eve opened her eyes, Phillips and Eve fell in love straight away.
“Would you kindly bring me to my mother?” asked Eve.
“Of course I will.” replied Phillip. He showed where the hospital was, and when Eve saw her mother she asked, “Are you okay?” Horsy said, “She’s going to be okay.” Eve cried. Then she sobbed, “Oh, Phillip, will you please take me back home when my mother is better?” “Of course I will, and we may marry.” Eve hugged Phillip.
Later they all did some wonderful things together, had a picnic, sing songs, have a race and Phillip even made perfume on Eve’s birthday. At last, Eve’s mother was better, (Hooray!) and walked until they came to a castle.
That’s when Eve saw her father carrying many bags full of grain. He said, “I need to get these bags of grain to the miller to make it into flour but I am hurt. I can’t do it. My knee is bleeding. I tripped over a rock and now my knee is bleeding. I don’t know what to do.
“Oh, no need. We will help you.” Said Eve. Then she put her hair on the bleeding part and sang, “Somebody is hurt, please help me my father is hur. Oh, please help me, he had to bring many bags of grain to he miller and as he walked, he tripped over a rock and he is bleeding. We don't’ know what to do. Oh, please help me.” Phillip didn’t believe how beautiful Eve’s voice was, Rombus and Horsy didn’t believe how beautiful Eve’s voice was and three of them thought they were dreaming, but they were not.
When Eve took her hair off, the bleeding was better. How magical Eve’s hair is!
Later they had their wedding. Eve and Phillip had a delicious cake with a rainbow, pieces of chocolate and some strawberry, blueberry, and raspberry and cherry sprinkle on the cake.
Eve’s father helped make the cake in the cooking room in the palace because he gave flour to the cookers. They worked very hard to make cookies, juice and delicious food.
The End
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