本帖最后由 dragon1978 于 2012-3-29 22:32 编辑
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赶快来给我订正订正。
29集也留给我哈。
订正：
28. christmas party
Everyone 's got together at penelope's house.
They are having a christmas party.
Merry chirstmas.
Merry christmas.
Wow, it's yummy.
Very good.
This is all delicious.
Penelope's mommy is a nice look cook.
I helps her.
It's so good.
Hey,look.
The presents from Santa Claus are here.
Wow.Presents,presents.
May i open it?
Yes,of course.
Yeah.It's so exciting to open presents,isn't it?
Oh, a tricycle.
It's nice and shining.
Oh, a plane.
This is for you too.
This is also for you .
A toy and a picture book.
Oh,what are they?
You shake them. try .
They're called maracas.
Maracas.
I've got the maracas..
What did she get?
It looks like she's got a black and yellow stripes.
Is it a tiger or a snake?
What do you think?
A honey bee!
Penelope.
I am a honey bee.zzzzzz
I've got a good idea.
What is penelope doing?
Where's penelope?
Penelope? where's she?
She is not here.
Where's she hiding now?
Penelope? Do you know?
No one can find me.
Let's have some christmas cake.
Christmas cake!
Who wants some?
I do! Oh! penelope.
This is so good.
Marine christine taught me how to make it.
Enjoy it.
I need a lot.
You've got with the cream all over your face.
Be careful Penelope.
Wow,is that a aeroplane ,a train, or a robot?
No,it's not. It's a rocket!
A rocket? a rocket! a rocket!
Take off. take off.
Where are you going to?
We're going to the cloud! To the moon!
We're going to the cake shop!
ha ha ha
Sing a song in the christmas time.
We're all a happy famliy singing in a joy happy nice.
Open the door, the snow's falling down,
It is so very magical.
Lots of gifts, lots of fun.
It is christmas time today.
la la Happy christmas. You have a merry christmas.
We're all a happy famliy.
Penenlope enjoyed the christmas party very much.
感谢dragon，辛苦辛苦！
我听了下，改了一些，其中比较肯定的用蓝色标注，不肯定的或者选择性意见的用红色标注。大家重点讨论红色部分。继续改啊！
28. christmas party
everyone 's got together at penelope's house.这里用at还是in?
they are having a christmas party.
merry chirstmas. merry christmas.
wow, it's yammy. very good.
these're all delicious.penelope's mommy is a nice look cook. 这里明明听到的是this is,但语法上应该是these're吧，奇怪
I helps her.
it's so good.
hey,look.the presents from Santa Claus are here.
wow.presents.presents.
may i open it?
yes,of course.
yeah.it's so exciting to open presents,isn't it?
oh, a tricycle. it's nice and shining.
Oh, a plane, this is for you too.
this is also for you .
a toy and a picture book.
oh,what are they?
you shake them. try .
they're called maracas.
maracas.i've got the maracas..
what did she get?
it looks like it got a black and yellow stripes.天啊，我听到的是it's...但语法可以么
is it a tiger or a snake?
what do you think?
a honey bee!
penelope. i am a honey bee.zzzzzz
i've got an good idea.
what is penelope doing?
where's penelope?
penelope? where's she?
she is not here.
where's she hiding now?
penelope? do you know?
no one can find me.
let's have some christmas cake.
christmas cake! who wants some?
i do! Oh! penelope.
this is so good.
marine christine taught me how to make it.
enjoy it.
i need a lot.
you've got with the cream all over your face.
be careful Penelope.
wow,is that a aeroplane ,a train, or a rowboat?
No,it's not. it's a rocket!
a rocket? a rocket! a rocket!
take off. take off.
where are you going to?
we're going to the cloud! To the moon!
we're going to the cake shop!
ha ha ha
sing a song in the christmas time.
we're all a happy famliy singing in a joy happy next.
open the door, the snow's falling down,
it is so very magical.
lots of gifts, lots of fun.
it is christmas time today.
la la happy christmas, you have a merry christmas.
we're all a happy famliy.
penenlope enjoyed the christmas party very much. ( enjoy? enjoyed? )