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本帖最后由 dragon1978 于 2012-5-8 13:13 编辑

给大家改错。
订正:

第34集 penelope builds a birdhouse
Hello,little bird,come over here.
I wonder why it won't come to me.
What would you do?
How would you make friends with birds?
Yes,i would read story to them.
Then they might come near me.
A long long time ago,there was...
What was next?let me see.
Ah,oh.It's gone.
If i make a house for the birds,like the one i make for max,i might become  friends with them.
A house ,a house,a house for the birds.
This is too big.This is too small.
Yes.
So,penelope,what are you going to ues to make a house?
Can you guess?
That shoe,it's the perfect house for the birds.
And i will put the grass bed inside.
Now little birdies , here is a fluffy house for you.
Come,come quick.
You scared  the birds this way.
I wonder why they won't come.
a...a...achoo.oh.no.
They've gone.oh dear,penelope.
Dad.hello,penelope.What are you doing?
I'm fixing our house.
Really,yes.
What have you thought of this time,penelope?
A birdhouse, the roof should be red like an apple and the wall should be yellow like a banana.
There's a fluffy bed inside and it would be great if there's a swing too.
And merry-go-round.
Great.it's perfect.
Dad.what is it,penelope?
Can you make a house for the birds?
En,this is really good,penelope.
Yes.there.all done.
What happened to merry go round?
I don't think the birds would play on the merry-go-round.
They don't need bed either?
I think the birds will make their own bed.
Dad.will the birds be friends with me?
I think the birds will be friends if you give them some bread.
Really?
Dad,did you put some bread inside?
Yes ,i did.
Wow.now the birds will come to visit you .yes.
Lucky birdies,it looks yummy.
I am hungry too.
Well,darling.let's have some lunch.
It's yummy.ah,the birds came to me.
The birds are very friendly now.
That looks fun,penelope.




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  • zhangxiaojun

    2012-3-26 03:10:03 使用道具

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  • 菲林

    2012-3-26 07:25:55 使用道具

    我先来改几处
    1. if I make a house for the birds, like the one I make for max,i might become friends with them.
    2. so,penelope,what are you going to use to make a house?
    3.that shoe, it’s a perfect house for the birds.
    4.now little birds, here is a lovely house for you.
    5.lucky birdies, it looks yummy.
  • TEDDY33

    2012-3-26 08:45:17 使用道具

    Good job~^o^

    我改一点点呵,旋转木马,要加小的破折号: merry-go-round .
  • TEDDY33

    2012-3-26 08:54:29 使用道具

    "there's a floppy bed inside and it would be better to get the swing too"
    这句里面,听到有个great.  好象是:it would be great to 。。。
  • nauknauk

    2012-3-26 14:34:21 使用道具

    There is a fluffy bed inside. And there will be a great time of swinging too. 我听得是这样子的。
  • nauknauk

    2012-3-27 11:03:59 使用道具

    是的。在great和swing之间有个单词,听起来像ovthere,可能是我们不常用的词,或许是秋千的材质,或者类型。以后再说吧,也许看得多了就知道了
  • dragon1978

    楼主 2012-3-27 11:08:00 使用道具

    nauknauk 发表于 2012-3-27 11:03
    是的。在great和swing之间有个单词,听起来像ovthere,可能是我们不常用的词,或许是秋千的材质,或者类型。 ...

    嗯。先放在这里,等其他同学来议议。
  • redforestsea

    2012-3-28 11:02:44 使用道具

    支持一下{:soso_e100:}
  • zhouyaya1

    2012-3-31 00:19:28 使用道具

    支持。。。。
  • 心情小雨

    2012-4-17 17:13:06 使用道具

    修改几个地方哦,大家看下
    1,Now little birdies , here is a fluffy house for you.
    ,2,There's a fluffy bed inside and it would be great if there's a swing too.
    3,I think they'll be friends with you if you give them some bread.
  • wja-tj

    2012-5-8 13:02:13 使用道具

    辛苦辛苦,mm威武