[说唱表演] 明天参加市里低年级口语比赛，请大家帮忙再帮我改下，是否还有语法问题？

Hello, everyone
Today my topic is “I Love Pandas”.
My father and I flew to Beijing last summer vacation. When we got to the Beijing zoo, we saw some pandas. I like them very much. They look like bears, but they are not scary.
Pandas live in China. They have very small tails and fat bodies. They are black and white. They’re very clumsy, but they can climb trees. They are not good at fast running, but they can even be faster than a human 100-meter dash champion in a sprint. They like eating bamboos very much. Look! The baby panda snuggling up to the mother panda.They are sleeping.They look very lovely. Pandas are my favorite animals.
Thank you!
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wwwchem

2012-6-28 12:02:14 使用道具

在北京比赛啊

wangyuou

楼主 2012-6-28 12:05:04 使用道具

江苏无锡的，和和调个

kiwi998

2012-6-28 12:22:23 使用道具

Pandas live in China.
你这句的意思是不是想说：熊猫原产中国？？如果是这个意思就要换这个表达：Pandas are native to China.

北极的企鹅

2012-6-28 13:53:35 使用道具

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龙之翔

2012-6-28 14:35:56 使用道具

Hello, everyone
The topic of my speach is “I Love Pandas”.
My father and I flew to Beijing last summer vacation. When we got to the Beijing zoo, those cute chubby pandas caught our attention .I have to admit that i had a major crush on them at first sight. They look like bears, but they are not so adorable, not scary at all.
Pandas live in China. Although they look very clumsy, they can climb trees. They are not good runners in the animal kindom, but they can beat human champions in 100-meter dash . They like eating bamboos very much. Look! The baby panda is snuggling up to the mother panda.Look at their small tails and chubby bodies.Isn't them adorable.?Pandas are my favorite animals.
Thank you!