请教高手，这句话的语法有什么问题

When I was very little, I had no friend to play with me.


bunny8于2012-7-18 09:25补充以下内容：
才6岁的小孩，语法没那么重要吧。就是美国本土娃，4、5岁说话语法有问题也是很正常的。

本帖最后由 yy'mom 于 2012-7-18 09:47 编辑

When I was a little, I had no friends  to play with me.

其实在她这样的年龄， 你没有必要去修改她的语法。你要做的就是鼓励她说或者写。


When I was a little, I did not have any friends to play with me.
When I was a little, I had no friends to play with me.

You can compare these two sentences and then can see the different between " had " and " did" .

谢谢帮忙修改。

她能写出来我已经很高兴了，所以不会去纠正她的错误的。

但是我得有辨别的能力啊，现在我还没有这样的能力。{:soso_e127:}

事实上，我家的孩子是一年级的孩子。但是，她老是在语法上犯错误，而且同样的错误犯2，3次是经常的。她的老师在现在
的阶段只是给她错误的地方勾出来，从来不修正。

我觉得应该是“When I was younger, I had no friends to play with me.”
因为孩子要表达的是过去的事情，所以动词时态要用一般过去时“was， had”，表示年龄小用young，younger是比较级形式。

同意。另外前面有位妈妈用not any,其实no = not any,但用no 更好更简洁。

When I very small ,I've no friend play with me.

改正的话，改动越少越好。把关键的问题找出来就行了。

small 肯定是不行的，那个是指 size 小。小孩子一般用 little，少年和年轻人 一般用 young。另外前面要加个 was

I've 换成 I had 比较好。但是时态是个比较难一些的问题，对这个年龄的孩子是次要的。我女儿的书上满篇的时态问题。

所以还是 When I was very little, I had no friend to play with me.

When I was very little, I had no friend to play with.