本帖最后由 lxq9918 于 2012-7-22 22:54 编辑
不管怎么样吧,打算从今天起把丫头的英文作文都记录到这个帖子里,本来暑期读书活动里有部分作文展示,但都是发的图片,不太方便,决心盖这个楼,一是为了鼓励她坚持写下去,二是记录她成长或者进步的点点滴滴。当妈妈的英语也不怎么样{:soso_e110:},只能稍微帮助改点语法知识,语言表达是否地道,一概不知{:soso_e106:}。其他同学或者小朋友们,你们可以帮助修改,可以指出她的错误,顺便检查下你是否和她犯同样的错误,然后大家一起进步。{:soso_e163:}
这个版块的作文展示也比较少,我们就凑个数吧,目前都是写些小故事,深的她也不会写。
7月11日
The Naught(y) Baby
One dark night, a three-year-old girl was crying .Her plump short mother and her grumpy father were sleepy, but the little girl kept crying, then she cried more loudly , her father groaned :" Don't cry, or I'll sent(应改为send) you out of the door." But ,the little girl still kept crying.Her father said:" I can't stand it any more." And he really sent her out of the door!
The little girl cried more and more loudly, and she was frightened, so she stomped and stomped, and when she stomped, the light of the porch began to glow. So she was not frightened any more, and when the light was glowing , she began to shout:"Help,help,somebody help." Even though her mother and father sent her out of the door ,they still couldn't sleep.So they said:" All right ,I'll let you in." Then they really let her in!But after they let her in, they knew it was a mistake at once!Because the little girl began to cry again.
红色部分是我给改过的,有拼写错误, 表达只要大的语法错误没有,基本没动。