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“仿写”——学英语的好方法

热度 61 已有 1772 次阅读 2012-12-29 17:16 个人分类:英语学习 系统分类:英语学习 学英语 , 写作

 寒假终于快到了,我建议中级班的学生们在快乐阅读英语原版书的基础上“仿写”。我特别喜欢这个方式,为什么呢?

首先想给孩子们一个容易点儿的创作起点。对于多数孩子们来说,原创是非常困难的。其实对成人不也一样?母语原创尚且如此,何况外语?所以我会鼓励孩子们原创,但绝不要求孩子们去原创,因为强求没有任何意义。强求的结果,还可能有反作用,让他们从此惧怕写作。

其实当孩子们真地找到自己喜爱的书,就像乘着作者造的一艘小舟,在情节或是知识的海洋中遨游。这是何等的享受?然后,自然而然地孩子们也有了造一艘小舟的欲望和热情......带着自己的真情实感,学着造一艘小舟吧,带上自己,邀上朋友们到海洋中去畅游一番......

当然像任何创作或创造,仿写也不免会碰到困难。这时,看看心爱的作者是怎样写的,对我们有什么启发......

“仿写”给了孩子一个用英语思维组织故事的机会,对非母语的孩子建立英语思维会有很大的帮助。

下面,先和大家分享一个我孩子瑞十岁时写的少年侦探故事。在读了“Encyclopedia Brown ”等少年侦探故事后,我建议他学着写个侦探故事,他欣然同意了。于是就有了下面这个天真可爱的故事。我基本上没有做过任何改动。

The Purloined Painting

 

“IT’S GONE!” cried Mr. Millen, the curator of Rill Art Museum. He quickly called the police. Soon, the police arrived.

 

 “What was stolen?” a policeman asked.

 

 “A valuable old painting,” Mr. Millen said in a calmer voice.

 

“The glass case doesn’t have any fingerprints on it,” the policeman said, “and it was opened by a key, not pried.”

 

“But only I, the security, and my friend Charles Chen who owns a Chinese restaurant next to the museum has the key to the glass case,” Mr. Millen said.

 

“Then we will question you three at the station,” said the policeman.

 

“Hey! Where is that old-n-valuable painting?” Mr. Millen’s son, Mark Millen asked when the police were ready to go.

 

“It was stolen,” replied Mr. Millen. “So the cops are going to question me, the security, and Mr. Chen.”

 

“Can I help?” Mark asked. He is eleven-year old and loves reading detective books.

 

He didn’t need to look for the solution at the back of the book. He could solve the mystery himself. What he was best at was proving who lied at questioning. Mr. Millen just wanted Mark to learn that in case this happens.

 

“Sure,” said the police. “Maybe you can help us.” Mark was even a little famous in the town. The police knew him too.

 

When they got to the police station, the police first questioned Mr. Millen.


“Where were you last night?”

 

“Sleeping in my house as normal as ever.”

 

“Where is your house?”

 

“Across the street.”

 

“When did you sleep last night?”


“Just nine o’ clock.”

 

They questioned the security who worked last night.

 

“When did you start to work last night?”

 

“At eleven o’ clock.”

 

“Did you ever hear or see anything strange last night?”

 

“I was walking around the museum when I heard some vehicle doors and a trunk slam. I didn’t see anything. I thought some people were on the street late.”

 

Finally they questioned Charles Chen.

 

“Where were you last night?”

 

“Sleeping in my house.”

 

“When did you get up?”

 

“Five o’ clock, because my restaurant opens at eight.”

 

The questioning was done. The police had no clue who was the thief.

 

So they asked Mark about it.

 

“I know, the thief is—

WHO?


 


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  • hidden 淼淼的妈妈

    2012-12-29 19:59

    学习了!
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  • hidden leimingxin

    2012-12-30 09:38

    中文也一样呢
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  • hidden 小璐璐妈

    2012-12-31 11:07

    学习
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  • hidden anita_xu

    2012-12-31 14:52

    就好像跟着美剧,原版动画片学口语,叫“仿说”
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  • hidden 偶然出手

    2013-1-1 00:25

    啊,10岁的小朋友这么厉害了
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  • hidden ccoo

    2013-1-3 09:12

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  • hidden lxy20031009

    2013-1-3 18:04

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  • hidden nancylibj

    2013-1-3 22:11

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  • hidden woailala

    2013-1-4 12:38

    牛娃牛娃
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  • hidden fcdmm

    2013-1-4 16:33

    真的有才
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  • hidden swuteresa

    2013-1-4 21:20

    仿写的不错啊
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  • hidden 2678499566

    2013-1-5 07:10

    学英语 这个办法很提高水平
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  • hidden ANDY616

    2013-1-5 09:43

    太强了,学习学习!
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  • hidden rzmm

    2013-1-5 09:55

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  • hidden 吴果果妈

    2013-1-5 15:38

    有道理,学习了。
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  • hidden strainless

    2013-1-8 08:45

    很好很强大,有其母必有其子!
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  • hidden 甲甲妈妈2010

    2013-1-9 13:08

    “仿说”“仿写”不仅提升了掌握语言的能力,更是提高了思维和写作能力。
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  • hidden yilisahan

    2013-1-9 17:13

    strainless: 很好很强大,有其母必有其子!
    您过奖了。
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  • hidden Zada

    2013-1-10 15:50

    认真学习了,宝宝也爱仿写一些东西!谢谢您
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  • hidden yilisahan

    2013-1-11 09:28

    Zada: 认真学习了,宝宝也爱仿写一些东西!谢谢您
    宝宝原创的能力也很强,呵呵。。。
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