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本帖最后由 wang020520 于 2014-3-16 19:50 编辑

请帮忙翻译下4首英语儿童诗,用词尽量优美些


My Shadow.
"My Shadow,"by Robert Louis Stevenson (1850-94), is one of the most popular short poemsextant.
I have a littleshadow that goes in and out with me,
And what can be theuse of him is more than I can see.
He is very, very likeme from the heels up to the head;
And I see him jumpbefore me, when I jump into my bed.
The funniest thingabout him is the way he likes to grow—
Not at all likeproper children, which is always very slow;
For he sometimesshoots up taller like an india-rubber ball,
And he sometimes getsso little that there's none of him at all.
He hasn't got anotion of how children ought to play,
And can only make afool of me in every sort of way.
He stays so closebeside me, he's a coward, you can see;
I'd think shame tostick to nursie as that shadow sticks to me!
One morning, veryearly, before the sun was up,
I rose and found theshining dew on every buttercup;
But my lazy littleshadow, like an arrant sleepy-head,
Had stayed at homebehind me and was fast asleep in bed.


How the Leaves Came Down.
"How the Leaves Came Down," bySusan Coolidge (1845-), appeals to children because it helps to reconcile themto going to bed.
S
"I'll tell youhow the leaves came down,"
The great Tree to hischildren said:
"You're gettingsleepy, Yellow and Brown,
Yes, very sleepy,little Red.
It is quite time togo to bed."
"Ah!"begged each silly, pouting leaf,
"Let us a littlelonger stay;
Dear Father Tree,behold our grief!
'Tis such a verypleasant day,
We do not want to goaway."
So, for just one moremerry day
To the great Tree theleaflets clung,
Frolicked and danced,and had their way,
Upon the autumnbreezes swung,
Whispering all theirsports among—
"Perhaps thegreat Tree will forget,
And let us stay untilthe spring,
If we all beg, andcoax, and fret.
"But the greatTree did no such thing;
He smiled to heartheir whispering.
"Come, children,all to bed," he cried;
And ere the leavescould urge their prayer,
He shook his head,and far and wide,
Fluttering andrustling everywhere,
Down sped theleaflets through the air.
I saw them; on theground they lay,
Golden and red, ahuddled swarm,
Waiting till one fromfar away,
White bedclothesheaped upon her arm,
Should come to wrapthem safe and warm.
The great bare Treelooked down and smiled.
"Good-night,dear little leaves," he said.
And from below eachsleepy child
Replied,"Good-night," and murmured,
"It is so niceto go to bed!"
















The Boy Who Never Told a Lie.
"The Boy Who NeverTold a Lie" (anonymous)
Once there was alittle boy,
With curly hair andpleasant eye—
A boy who always toldthe truth,
And never, never tolda lie.
And when he trottedoff to school,
The children allabout would cry,
"There goes thecurly-headed boy—
The boy that nevertells a lie."
And everybody lovedhim so,
Because he alwaystold the truth,
That every day, as hegrew up,'
Twas said,"There goes the honest youth."
And when the peoplethat stood near
Would turn to ask thereason why,
The answer would bealways this:
"Because he never tells a lie."

If I Had But Two Little Wings.
"If I Had But Two Little Wings," bySamuel Taylor Coleridge (1772-1834)

If I had but twolittle wings
And were a littlefeathery bird,
To you I'd fly, mydear!
But thoughts likethese are idle things
And I stay here.
But in my sleep toyou I fly:
I'm always with youin my sleep!
The world is allone's own.
And then one wakes,and where am I?
All, all alone.

最佳答案

最后一首 If I Had But Two Little Wings 可以参考这个: http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_75ee970b0100pd7z.html 翻译比较准确,但是诗意不足。 查看完整内容

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  • elamelam

    2014-3-16 19:48:19 使用道具

    最后一首 If I Had But Two Little Wings 可以参考这个:
    http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_75ee970b0100pd7z.html

    翻译比较准确,但是诗意不足。
  • anniesunshine_7

    2014-3-16 20:25:48 使用道具

    我来一首吧! 断章取义,不知道对不对?
    If I had but twolittle wings
    And were a littlefeathery bird,
    To you I'd fly, mydear!
    But thoughts likethese are idle things
    And I stay here.
    But in my sleep toyou I fly:
    I'm always with youin my sleep!
    The world is allone's own.
    And then one wakes,and where am I?
    All, all alone.
    #############
    如果我是一只小鸟
    我愿飞向你
    哪怕羽翼未丰
    可这只能是我的幻想
    因为我还在这里

    我在睡梦里和你在一起
    我在睡梦中飞向你

    总是一个人的世界
    梦醒之时,我在哪里?
    一个人的世界
    一直都是
  • 吴一一

    2014-3-16 20:36:09 使用道具

    我要是有对儿小翅膀,
    变成毛绒绒的小鸟儿,
    那我这就飞到你身边,宝贝!

    可这不过是空想,
    我哪里也飞不成。
    但美梦借我一双翅膀,送我来到你身旁,
    梦里你我总相伴!
    世界全都属于我。
    可怜一旦睁开眼,
    自问今又在何方?
    形单影只,孤零零。

  • cn66441989

    2014-3-16 20:55:58 使用道具

    楼主能否解释一下这个用途?是让孩子明白诗句的内容?还是翻译的作业?弄清楚翻译的目地才好办。
  • elamelam

    2014-3-16 21:24:14 使用道具

    本帖最后由 elamelam 于 2014-3-16 21:32 编辑

    上面说的对,不知道你的目的是什么?

    第一首 My Shadow 可参阅这个:
    http://www.joyen.net/article/listen/2/201011/3547.html

    坦白说,我不觉得上面这个翻译得很准确,但是因为不知你的目的,就姑且先给你看看。
  • wang020520

    楼主 2014-3-17 08:44:04 使用道具

    谢谢楼上几位了,是我家小孩学校朗诵比赛用的,然后要把讲稿贴出来,我怕翻译得不到位,只能求助各位了……。{:1_1:}

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  • 吴一一

    2014-3-17 10:32:02 使用道具

    Once there was alittle boy,                                从前有个小家伙,
    With curly hair andpleasant eye—                       头发卷卷眼睛圆,
    A boy who always toldthe truth,                        从来没有撒过谎,
    And never, never tolda lie.                                 一直都是说实话。

    And when he trottedoff to school,                     他一路小跑到学校,
    The children allabout would cry,                          孩子们全都大声叫:
    "There goes thecurly-headed boy—                     卷毛小子他跑来啦,
    The boy that nevertells a lie."                             他从来没有撒过谎。
    And everybody lovedhim so,                               所以人人把他爱,
    Because he alwaystold the truth,                        因为诚实才可爱。

    That every day, as hegrew up,'                           一天一天他长大
    Twas said,"There goes the honest youth."           “诚实的小伙,”人人夸
    And when the peoplethat stood near                  要是有人不明白
    Would turn to ask thereason why,                       问问他是为什么
    The answer would bealways this:                         原因总是一句话
    "Because he never tells a lie."                             “他从来不曾把谎撒”
  • wang020520

    楼主 2014-3-19 17:38:48 使用道具

    谢谢各位热心网友,但最佳答案只能选一位,积分我只能给一个人啦。

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