Today, when I woke up ,my mum told me to hurry up and she also told me about the poetry reciting competition.
I quickly got out of bed (quickly) to brushed my teeth,and went to school to make (up) my face. When I finished my turn,I went outside and got ready.
When the competition had started,we went up to the stage,the coach wanted us to dance when we spoke.
When the competition started,we went up to the stage. The coach wanted us to dance when we spoke.
And when the show was over,one of my friends let us to curtsey after we finished.
one of my friend會不會好點LU爸?
I quickly got out of bed (quickly) to brushed my teeth,and went to school to make (up) my face. When I finished my turn,I went outside and got ready.
When the competition had started,we went up to the stage,the coach wanted us to dance when we spoke.
When the competition started,we went up to the stage. The coach wanted us to dance when we spoke.
And when the show was over,one of my friends let us to curtsey after we finished.
one of my friend會不會好點LU爸?
希望你別介意啊。