纪念娃的处女作!
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2017-8-3 13:40
系统分类:成长记录
Everyone like Will's idea."It's a good idea!" everyone said. Everyone brought lots of things at home. Chip brought an air balloon. Mrs. May bought it, so she can ride on the balloon. She was pleased, so she said " thank you " to Wilf. Other people bought children's things, so the school have lots of money, so they buy lots of new things too.这篇处女作是改编了The Balloon 里为学校筹款的故事。虽然语法、拼写、用法有很多错误。但半天的努力,第一次写成这样,是娃的一大成功!继续努力,宝贝,你一定会越做越好的。