One day, Toney was walking with her dog Martha, they had not gone very far when they met an old boy, this boy was very silly, because he always asked for help, at first, Toney thought that he was a kind boy, and she went there to cheer him up, she asked Martha for her bag, and Martha handed her the bag she zipped it, and took out some cold mild and some for her to eat and drink, then the boy felt much better,
看了开首几行, 不些不太明白.,
1) an old boy --- 不知 lulu 原意是指什么, 老头子还是年轻人? 如果是年轻人可以用 a young boy, 或 lad
2) Matha 应该是头狗, Martha handed her the bag, 用 hand 会否过于人像化?
3) took out some cold mild 是 Toney 还是 Martha? 标点不清晰
我只是好奇问问, 別无他意. Lulu很棒
LULU确实很优秀,能在二级城市,幼儿英语氛围几乎没有的地方,做到这一点,就是榜样! 让大多人看到这是一条可行的路。
还记得四岁多的LULU自己玩的时候自说自话的视频,给我坚持下去的信心,目前我家丫头也四岁多了,虽然达不到LULU的词汇量,但也自说自话的边说边玩,所以,坚持是第一位的。